need

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Friday, 04-Jan-2008 13:04:22

this is a little thing I wrote. thoughts?
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Need:

Where’s the one whose fingers, at once feather light and teasing, at other times, fiery and insistent, always causing my blood to rush in my veins, pulsing liquid electricity behind my skin? The one whose touch can leave me gasping for breath and weak in the knees? The one who leaves me a mass of sated flesh, burning in that o-so good way? Teeth marks and bruised lips and tired languid joy. I have yet to find that one, that ever elusive one who can make me wet at a simple word. When I do, though, I’ll hold on for dear life. I want to feel alive. To lay on the sand, or in the grass, to look up at the sky and breathe in the sun and the air and the wind and to just, be, alive. Vibrant and living and fluid, like liquid purity I compared myself to in that one poem I wrote. I want desire to race threw me like a current from a live wire, my heart to trip over itself every time I see that one. I want my breath to catch at the sound of their voice. I want it all. I want my heart to ache and my limbs to twitch when we’re apart for too long. I, just, want.

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Post 2 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Friday, 04-Jan-2008 18:17:41

Well ok then. verry good and awwww you have issues too smile hugs hugs. Good work girly

Post 3 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Friday, 04-Jan-2008 18:50:27

Thanks, Maria!

Post 4 by Blondie McConfusion (Blah Blah Blah) on Friday, 04-Jan-2008 18:50:29

very good sharie. and so true for more than just you. :)

Post 5 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Saturday, 05-Jan-2008 12:49:03

lol, thanks, Pipi!

Post 6 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Sunday, 06-Jan-2008 3:34:00

Very good and interesting writing.

Post 7 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Sunday, 06-Jan-2008 12:58:31

thanks!

Post 8 by Siriusly Severus (The ESTJ 1w9 3w4 6w7 The Taskmaste) on Wednesday, 30-Jan-2008 20:17:57

It's nice, yes.